Recreational time is a necessity especially in
this
modern era, where people are encountering
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stiff competition, not only in their workplace but
also
in their daily life.
The practical way to spend my leisure time
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is being in
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nature,
although
by our actions we are destroying it.
On the one hand, the merits of having free time are numerous.
, it
the
and mental
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of the person.
This
is because it
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the immune system and the risk of having
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disease
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the possibility of relaxing,from the busy schedule,and doing things that bring enjoyment,
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to a human being.
Secondly
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stress, is one motive
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nervous breakdown,by escaping a day from the daily routine,
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helps
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psychological problems.
For example
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workers , who are diligent and overworked, have a greater risk of getting
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depression and developing later anxiety.
On the other hand
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causes
problems.
First
,
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procrastination is activated, due to the fact that the person has to get out of his/her
zone, which may have serious consequences in achieving their goals.
Moreover
, it causes depression,
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reason
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that people do not find a motive or a goal to fight for,
therefore
even their
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and
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may suffer.
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found that the lack
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of feeling utile harms
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long term the person.
In conclusion, both have
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and cons, but
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still believe that people should
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their
and desires