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Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.

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However
globalization
 promotes worldwide economies positively, the governments should be paid attention to its negative aspects. While it is argued that
globalization
 causes detrimental results, I believe that it produces great breakthroughs though authorities should take care
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 harmful outcomes of globalizing.
Globalization
 has a beneficial influence on our lives.
Globalization
 develops local economies. So, it helps nations to decline
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 unemployment rate and raise economic growth.
Furthermore
,
globalized
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 economy advances technology.
For example
, when a multinational company establishes a factory in a developing country, the new equipment, the new management skills and job vacancies are all in the best interest of the local society.
Moreover
,
globalization
 has transformed the world into
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 village.
As a result
, people all over the world can communicate together easier than
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 past
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internet
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 and satellite TV.
On the other hand
, nobody can deny the devastating consequences of
globalization
. One of the crucial sides is
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cultural shock. Worldwide networks and televisions have severely affected young people. These facilities have escalated cultural differences and generation gaps.
For instance
, when young aged persons watch popular superstars like singers, actors, actresses etc., on satellite channels. They imitate their behaviours, clothes, etc.,
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 leads to misbehaviours among adolescents.
In addition
, another critical impact of globalizing is the danger of epidemic diseases which can easily spread because of faster transportation and
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 in the number of tourists.
This
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 the recent
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 flu disease which has infected most Asian countries over a short period of time. In conclusion,
although
globalization
 has sparked a heated debate in recent decades whether it is a blessing or a curse, I believe that
globalization
 is playing an increasingly useful role in today's communities but we should not ignore
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 side effects of
globalization
. As a matter of fact, impoverished nations should provide
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 infrastructures and benchmark successful developing countries
such
 as Brazil and China in order to decrease the disadvantages of
globalization
.
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