Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

It is argued that nowadays it is extremely important to focus on farmlands, housing and industry for humanity by some type of community.

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, others think

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the contrary way and argue that giving lands

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endangered

animals

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more essential. I totally agree with both sides and give some evidence

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the arguments in the following paragraphs. On the one hand,

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humanity has huge demands

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the farmlands or

industrials

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fields

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as building houses and factories. Because

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growing

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population and developing technologies all around the world, the demand

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them significantly increased.

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, if the number of people

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up around the world, it means that the request

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accommodations and

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products

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eat

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growth.

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, it is really necessary to give

lands

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to the

animals

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who are

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danger to disappear.

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, these species can be very helpful in producing

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types of drugs.

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, if a new drug is manufactured, observing the

animals

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can tell scientists whether

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drug is beneficial for its

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or dangerous.

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, endangered

animals

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such

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helpful in not only checking medicines but producing kind of them. In conclusion, lending lands

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the

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housing and for the increasing

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industrialism or

tot he

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type of species which are endangered has some advantages and disadvantages, In my opinion,

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care of endangered

animals

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is much better

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offering earth to the new opportunities.