classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary epoch, every discussion culminates
into
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digitalisation. Whilst some proponents emphasise the significance of digital transformation in
education
, there are some opponents who
believes
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that
the
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teaching must be the
responsibility
of
teachers
. In my perspective,
both
views have
its
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their
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own merits and demerits. Generations of successful
students
were crafted in the yesteryears with
classroom
teaching.
This
method not only
teach
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students
academic
curriculum
but
also
enhances social skills.
Moreover
,
teachers
can share their
experience
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experiences
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for
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with
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unpredicted
scenerios
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scenarios
and
also
ensure special attention for children who are slow to learn.
In addition
,
teachers
can customise their sessions in
such
a way that the kids in the group
follows
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.
For instance
, tutors can arrange
supplimentary
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supplementary
classes for
students
who are lagging behind
,
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and can evaluate them individually.
Conversely
,
advent
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of
internet
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coupled with
supporting
devices
have
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has
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enabled digital
devices
to penetrate into
school's
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the school's
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curriculum
.
Consequently
, there
responsibility
of
teachers
is limited to
execution
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the execution
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of these chapters in the
classroom
projectors and address any questions.
Furthermore
, in higher grades and colleges, the role of
teachers
is
further
minimized, as the
students
are asked to perform research on
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the internet
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internet
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and prepare for assessments. An eminent example of
this
is the various college seminars, where the
students
are assigned the task
to check
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websites and blogs for subjects and discussions. To recapitulate,
while
both
the
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approaches have
its
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their
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own advantages and disadvantages, I come up with the conclusion that a combination of in-person teaching
along
with
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apply
show examples
technology must be used for
education
.
This
will ensure that
both
students
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, as well as teachers,
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as well as
teachers
stay up-to-date with the latest educational methodologies and gadgets. In the contemporary epoch, every discussion culminates in digitalisation. Whilst some proponents emphasise the significance of digital transformation in
education
, there are some opponents who believe that teaching must be the
responsibility
of
teachers
. In my perspective,
both
views have their own merits and demerits. Generations of successful
students
were crafted in the yesteryears with
classroom
teaching.
This
method not only teaches
students
academic
curriculum
but
also
enhances social skills.
Moreover
,
teachers
can share their experiences with unpredicted scenarios and
also
ensure special attention for children who are slow to learn.
In addition
,
teachers
can customise their sessions in
such
a way that the kids in the group follow.
For instance
, tutors can arrange supplementary classes for
students
who are lagging behind
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
and can evaluate them individually.
Conversely
, the advent of the
internet
coupled with
supporting
devices
has enabled digital
devices
to penetrate into the school's
curriculum
.
Consequently
, the
responsibility
of
teachers
is limited to the execution of these chapters in the
classroom
projectors and addressing any questions.
Furthermore
, in higher grades and colleges, the role of
teachers
is
further
minimized, as the
students
are asked to perform research on the
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
show examples
and prepare for assessments. An eminent example of
this
is the various college seminars, where the
students
are assigned the task
to check
Change preposition
of checking
show examples
websites and blogs for subjects and discussions. To recapitulate,
while
both
approaches have their own advantages and disadvantages, I come up with the conclusion that a combination of in-person teaching
along
with
Change preposition
apply
show examples
technology must be used for
education
.
This
will ensure that
both
students
,
as well as
teachers
,
teachers
stay up-to-date with the latest educational methodologies and gadgets.
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