You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter introduce yourself say why you are interested in this sports club ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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to enquire about membership details
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your club. I am John Onasis,
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year Business Management student
Ulster
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University. I have been living in London
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in
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a student visa. I have started a swimming course
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our university and we
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don't
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have a large swimming pool
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our university. I will learn introductory and theoretical practices
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university
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university
and I
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like to do practical sessions in your club. please let me know the
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membership
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membership
fee and the facilities you offered.
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I am
looking
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forward
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to hearing
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form
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you Yours sincerely
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