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some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundation subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both sides

#parents #mathematics #school #foundation #life
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 era, there are split opinions regarding
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 as part of school curricula. Some people believe it is
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unnecessary
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unnecessary
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 both view perspectives in my point
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 view,
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development
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parents who consider
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,because school curricula
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 very compromised, containing subject that may not help the learner in their future career,learning
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, there are children, who are talented in history
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wasting
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 time in formulas.
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, pressuring the child, who
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 innate in other fields,may lead to School nervous break syndrome
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.scientists have found a direct impact on lack of zeal in studying a particular subject with the rate of
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,
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psychological
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developement
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pupils
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 since it stimulates
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critical and problem
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 thinking.
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, its aim on increasing the
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concentration
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concentration
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conscientious
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maintained
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maintained
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