Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizer and better machinery. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

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Food could be manufactured at a low cost due to new developments. Nowadays, food can be made much cheaper thanks to developed fertilizers and suitable machinery. In

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the pros & cons of that areas & give my opinion based on

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of all,

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had many benefits.

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as more harvest gained from the low resources. As we know resources are limited in the current world when compared with the global population.

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, people always try to develop food technology to increase productivity with low resources and with low cost.

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, when using some developed fertilizer, gain a higher harvest even got previous.

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, there are some disadvantages. Those improvements are not transferred or communicated to the developing countries due to needing high capital and developed technology for using those

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the fields.

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, they are using traditional methods for their

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mechanism with higher costs.

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, there is some bad health effect on the human body from these usages.

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, when continuously using some fertilizers, there are bad effects on the human body parts,

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as the heart, kidneys & Etc.

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, not only humans but

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, machinery is delivering environmental pollution

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of using.

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, some are doing air pollution and even water pollution. In conclusion, when we look at the both pros & cons we sense that there are more drawbacks compared with the advantages

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

249 words

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