Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nobody can deny that today’s society is developing strongly in many different aspects. Life

as well as

intellectuals are increasingly advanced,

however

, society is

happening

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experiencing

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a phenomenon called “Brain Drain” The following article will present

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this

issue. On the one hand, part of

this

phenomenon occurs because of subjective reasons when we seek a better and more comfortable life, so we choose to run after money,

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and devote

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devote

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and devote

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our brains

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brains

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our brains

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to the

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nation

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nationwide

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but forget the nation of origin.

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, the winners of the “Duong

len dinh

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Len Dinh

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Olympia” competition show that most of those

people

studied abroad and chose to stay and work. That makes our

country

lose human capital, even they have forgotten about patriotism and the

country

is waiting for them to return to support and help the

country

. The rest is an objective reason, considering that the remuneration of talented

people

in our

country

is still low compared to other countries in the UK, USA, France, etc. Ideas and knowledge have not been developed much, making talented

people

have no ideas so they will want to study abroad more, explore more and

then

they

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choose to stay and work there

On the other hand

, each person needs to have the right awareness,

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ready to contribute to the

country

, ignoring personal interests.

While

studying abroad, they still have to keep their patriotism, studying abroad only makes sense when talented

people

know

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learn and improve their knowledge to contribute to the

country

. The noble leader Ho Chi Minh,

also

known as Nguyen Sinh Cung,

who

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went to find a way to save the

country

traveled

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travelled

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to strange places to learn, and after 30 years he returned and helped liberate the

country

. He left with two empty hands when returning, he is a talent with many ways to help the

country

In addition

, our

country

should increase the remuneration for

talents

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talent

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upgrade

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and upgrade

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the infrastructure

better

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to recruit more

talents

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talent

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both domestic and foreign. In short, it would be good and meaningful if talented

people

could study abroad and still be patriotic and conscious of helping the

country

However

, their talents will be maximized if they get to live where they want, the life they want and the work they like. I am of the opinion that

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people

have the freedom to choose the place they live.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

387 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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