Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nobody can deny that today’s society is developing strongly in many different aspects. Life
as well as
intellectuals are increasingly advanced,
however
, society is
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a phenomenon called “Brain Drain” The following article will present
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this
issue. On the one hand, part of
this
phenomenon occurs because of subjective reasons when we seek a better and more comfortable life, so we choose to run after money,
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our brains
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to the
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nationwide
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but forget the nation of origin.
For example
, the winners of the “Duong
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Olympia” competition show that most of those
people
studied abroad and chose to stay and work. That makes our
country
lose human capital, even they have forgotten about patriotism and the
country
is waiting for them to return to support and help the
country
. The rest is an objective reason, considering that the remuneration of talented
people
in our
country
is still low compared to other countries in the UK, USA, France, etc. Ideas and knowledge have not been developed much, making talented
people
have no ideas so they will want to study abroad more, explore more and
then
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choose to stay and work there
On the other hand
, each person needs to have the right awareness,
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ready to contribute to the
country
, ignoring personal interests.
While
studying abroad, they still have to keep their patriotism, studying abroad only makes sense when talented
people
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learn and improve their knowledge to contribute to the
country
. The noble leader Ho Chi Minh,
also
known as Nguyen Sinh Cung,
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went to find a way to save the
country
,
traveled
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to strange places to learn, and after 30 years he returned and helped liberate the
country
. He left with two empty hands when returning, he is a talent with many ways to help the
country
.
In addition
, our
country
should increase the remuneration for
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,
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the infrastructure
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to recruit more
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both domestic and foreign. In short, it would be good and meaningful if talented
people
could study abroad and still be patriotic and conscious of helping the
country
.
However
, their talents will be maximized if they get to live where they want, the life they want and the work they like. I am of the opinion that
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people
have the freedom to choose the place they live.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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