Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nobody can deny that today’s society is developing strongly in many different aspects. Life

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intellectuals are increasingly advanced,

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a phenomenon called “Brain Drain” The following article will present

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phenomenon occurs because of subjective reasons when we seek a better and more comfortable life, so we choose to run after money,

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Olympia” competition show that most of those

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studied abroad and chose to stay and work. That makes our

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lose human capital, even they have forgotten about patriotism and the

country

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is waiting for them to return to support and help the

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. The rest is an objective reason, considering that the remuneration of talented

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in our

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is still low compared to other countries in the UK, USA, France, etc. Ideas and knowledge have not been developed much, making talented

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choose to stay and work there

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studying abroad, they still have to keep their patriotism, studying abroad only makes sense when talented

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learn and improve their knowledge to contribute to the

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known as Nguyen Sinh Cung,

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went to find a way to save the

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to strange places to learn, and after 30 years he returned and helped liberate the

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. He left with two empty hands when returning, he is a talent with many ways to help the

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upgrade

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the infrastructure

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to recruit more

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both domestic and foreign. In short, it would be good and meaningful if talented

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could study abroad and still be patriotic and conscious of helping the

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, their talents will be maximized if they get to live where they want, the life they want and the work they like. I am of the opinion that

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people

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have the freedom to choose the place they live.

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