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In education and employment some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

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this
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 present world, an increasing number of
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 spend more effort on their studies and
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 than their peers.It is undeniable that working hard is one of the efficient means to achieve a personal goal.
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 essay will discuss why the number of citizens who are willing to
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 harder is constantly on a rise and why working hard should always be seen as a good thing.
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 of all,while
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 have goals for their future,they obviously know that hard
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 has a substantial contribution to fulfilling those goals.
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,some groups
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 harder for having a brighter future.
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,in school whoever wanted to be a doctor was studying more compared to other students.
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, a section of
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 who is less talented need to devote more time to dedicate to their weakening subjects,so that they will be able to meet the demands of the prospective job market. From my perspective, hard
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 is
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 constructive to our society.
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 with,while citizens
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 harder for their targets,at the same time
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 will foster the community to develop better.The harder they
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,the more money they earn and the more taxes government can cut from their incomes.
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,the Japanese are
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people
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 who are quite diligent ,and because of
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 Japan has one of the best living performances for their citizens,since the government use taxes to improve welfare （housing,medicare, education,etc）. In conclusion, individuals tend to have a splendid future ,
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 they
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 harder. I hold the belief that it is always a positive trend to see more hard-working
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, they play an important role in building a harmonious society because they pay more taxes to their government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genetic predisposition
  • Work ethic
  • Upbringing
  • Cultural values
  • Ambitions
  • Motivated
  • Fear of failure
  • Competitive nature
  • Overworking
  • Burnout
  • Stress-related health issues
  • Productivity
  • Quality of life
  • Healthy balance
  • Long-term productivity
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