Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that supports universal education. To what extent do you agree .

It is undeniable that many

parents

at present have many options in terms of

schools

to choose for their children

such

as public

schools

, private

schools

and international

schools

, resulting in some

parents

thinking

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that if they send their kids to private or international

schools

, they will not pay educational

taxes

for the

state

governments. From my point of view, I disagree with

this

statement for many reasons which will be outlined in the detail in the following paragraph. It is true to say that some families who send their children to private

schools

may agree with that movement because they claim that they dramatically pay the

money

for term fees of their children, and why do they pay

taxes

to

support

education for public

schools

.

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Furthermore

, they think that they are buying school supplies and other materials for their kids by themself without supporting the

state

union

in their country.

For example

,

parents

are spending the majority

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money

on school uniforms, books, pens and other resources with their own income.

However

, others, including me, disagree with

this

statement because educational

taxes

not only

support

public

schools

but

also

support

private

schools

as well, while it may be a little, compared with government-financed

schools

.

For instance

, students in Thailand in private

schools

can be supported by

state

grants in ways of supporting academic subjects.

Additionally

, the

state

union

will help school owners to reduce a business tax and a land tax,

as a result

, students will not pay

money

for their tuition fees too much. In conclusion, I strongly disagree with that viewpoint because paying

taxes

can help the

state

union

improve the educational systems in the ways of others

,

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like they can create the public building for learning to younger people ,and they can make some activities to

support

the cognitive skills of young persons when they have enough

money

.

Therefore

, it is recommended that many

parents

should pay

taxes

to encourage their

state

union

to develop the educational systems because it will be beneficial for their kids.