It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern times
people
love to take risks so that they can become more
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in Professional
life
. There are some benefits and drawbacks to taking risks in Personal and Professional
life
. From my perspective, there are more advantages than drawbacks as I will outline below. Generally speaking, there is a number of advantage to taking risks in
life
.
To begin
with, taking
risk
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brings a lot of
opportunity
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opportunities
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in
life
,
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helps to upgrade their skill.
Furthermore
, there is a chance after taking
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the risk
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to
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fall down but it helps to
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something new and it makes them more Perfect in future. For
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instance
intance
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, if anyone takes
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in his Professional
life
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he
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fail
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to
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, it's not hurt his personal
life
. Despite these benefits, there are
also
various disadvantages to taking
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in
life
. Perhaps the main cons of
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it can
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darkness
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People
life's
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. A person who
have
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the
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responsibility in
this
office, if
he
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takes a
discission
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by
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his own and
then
he failed to conquer it, all of his
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will suffer. Some
people
want to start their own
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and left their job to start
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business.
Although
it is good to take
this
kind of
risk
but
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his family and friends would be suffered if he fails. To sum up, nowadays
people
have
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to
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a risk
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risk
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in their personal and Professional
life
. In my view, the advantage of taking
risk
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outweigh the disadvantage.
People
should take
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the risk
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risk
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so that they could be more successful and improve the
economy
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of their country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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