You rented a car from Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. you phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment regarding the faulty

car

that I rented from your company , Dubai Rental Service, City Center branch in Dubai, on Wednesday

last

week. The cooling system of the

car

stopped working the

day

after I rented it and even after my written complaint, it has not been sorted out. My name is Venkatesh Ravichandran, and I live in the wooden street area. I am working as a Marketing Manager with the BMW company located in Manchester city. Recently, I met with an accident so I have to give my automobile for repair.

Therefore

, I have started using a rental

car

from your company until I get my motor repaired. As I mentioned earlier, I am a marketing manager so I need to drive frequently to meet my clients. The

day

when I rented the

car

, the air cooling system was working fine.

However

, It has stopped working the

day

. Owing to

this

issue, I am unable to take it for a ride. I would request the organization to either change the

car

or send the team to repair the air conditioner if only it can be fixed within a

day

. I look forward to hearing back from you immediately. Yours faithfully, Venkatesh Ravichandran

Submitted by crvenkatesh1904 on Wed Nov 30 2022

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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215 words

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