Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Owing to the world financial system, even earlier essential necessities are imported from the farthest
countries
. It is highly lucrative.
Firstly
,
this
essay acknowledges its pron. In the following, it is described its cons. In certain nations, suitable weather conditions make it feasible to grow enough essential food for thousands of hectares. So not only their people but
also
who live on other sides of the world benefit from these
products
. What is more, in some
countries
such
as China, due to overpopulation, a large number of workers are available which leads to reducing initial costs.
Therefore
, other
countries
prefer to import their needs rather than domestic production. These mutual interactions not only lead to purchases by the
countries
in need but
also
cause the sale of the
products
in exporting
countries
. On the other side, shipping problems
such
as long distances and the possibility of financial and life losses due to natural disasters, throw a spanner in the work,
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it leads inflation to in generating the country because of a shortage in the country that has dramatically exported their
products
.
Moreover
, users become too dependent and after a while, they could not survive without others’ needs. In some cases, even the tiniest problem broke international relationships. for instants in coincidental accidents, leaders blame each other. To sum up,
countries
expand their relations by importing and exporting their
products
from far distances in the far corners of the world. It has a lot of advantages and some rare drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global economy
  • Consumer choice
  • Economic benefits
  • Job creation
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Infrastructure
  • Standard of living
  • Cost efficiencies
  • Raw materials
  • Production processes
  • Specialization
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Pollution
  • Supply chain disruptions
  • Local industries
  • Cultural dilution
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