Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today’s world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?
Visual
arts
are considered an integral part of all societies. In this
modern era, despite some eradication in some parts of the world, fine arts
still have a place in this
technological age and also
pupils should spend more time learning and practising different types of art
at school, moreover
schools aim at teaching kids moral and crucial values.
First
and foremost, In this
digital era, some parts of art
have been replaced by high-tech equipment, by way of illustration, digital paintings are becoming more popular, day by day, especially in developed countries, but they can not fulfil a sense of creativity. Moreover
, you can not play music
with either state-of-art
mobile phones or personal computers. Melody has given meaning when we touch instruments, not when we touch keyboards.
Secondly
, I would accept people's viewpoint who does not have an appreciation of art
. But, multiple pieces of research illustrate that fine arts
have a great impact on humans' mental health and can influence their physical activity. For instance
, if you listen to a track of music
which you love, your brain's cells would enhance their activity, especially after your favourite part of it, in addition
, it can lead to improving your efficiency. Also
, children can improve their creativity by crafting something new, for instance
, piece of music
or painting.
By way of conclusion, Despite some changes in how to involve with art
, fine arts
are an integral and crucial part of our whole world. Moreover
, children should spend more and more time learning music
to improve their brain activity and also
develop their creativity.Submitted by melika7amouian9 on
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