Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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way
to promote a
product
. Certain
people
believes
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that it is
a
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unbeaten path to make
people
purchase
products
whereas some other convicts that publicity of
product
is now an ordinary
way
individuals
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are not get attracted to it anymore. In my opinion, it can be possible to sell more
products
by
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through
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advertisement
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advertisements
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as
people
have to watch
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the ad
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ad
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ads
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with or without their desire.
First
of all, promoting
products
through various
ad
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is an effective
way
to increase sales of the
product
. As nowadays
people
are more
rely
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on
internet
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the internet
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,
consequently
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social
media
ad is a strong path to make
people
buy the
product
. In my view, it is straightforward to buy something by watching its
advertisement
.
For example
,
young
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generation buys a lot of clothes and their daily items
via
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online and they order them through different social
media
and websites as they view the
product related
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promotional
offer
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offers
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.
As a result
, many more local businesses started to build websites as well as social
media
pages that are related to their business.
In addition
, the number of
products
selling
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has
also
increased just because of
this
advertisement
.
On the other hand
, promoting
products
are become a general
way
, as it is the only workable
way
that has been running for years.
As a result
,
people
always try to skip them because of
same
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advertisement
's repetition.
For example
, when we watch any video through YouTube or any social
media
, perhaps it shows some
advertisement
videos
first
. When we skip them after 1 or 2 minutes, it comes back that it is actually boring, and individuals get annoyed.
In addition
, when we watch
a
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same video after a particular time it affects our brain to remind these videos for long hours. To conclude, though a little bit side effects advertisements have,
but
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still it is a great
way
to sell
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a product
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product
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products
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or increase
the
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profit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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