Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Advisement is an incredible
way
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to promote a
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. Certain
people
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believes
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that it is
a
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unbeaten path to make
people
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purchase
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whereas some other convicts that publicity of
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is now an ordinary
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individuals
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for individuals
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are not get attracted to it anymore. In my opinion, it can be possible to sell more
products
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by
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advertisement
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advertisements
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as
people
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have to watch
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the ad
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ad
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ads
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with or without their desire.
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of all, promoting
products
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through various
ad
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ads
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is an effective
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to increase sales of the
product
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. As nowadays
people
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are more
rely
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on
internet
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the internet
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,
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consequently
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social
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ad is a strong path to make
people
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buy the
product
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. In my view, it is straightforward to buy something by watching its
advertisement
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.
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,
young
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the young
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generation buys a lot of clothes and their daily items
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online and they order them through different social
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and websites as they view the
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product related
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product-related
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promotional
offer
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offers
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.
As a result
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, many more local businesses started to build websites as well as social
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pages that are related to their business.
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, the number of
products
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selling
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has
also
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increased just because of
this
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advertisement
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.
On the other hand
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, promoting
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are become a general
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, as it is the only workable
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that has been running for years.
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,
people
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always try to skip them because of
same
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the same
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advertisement
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's repetition.
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, when we watch any video through YouTube or any social
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, perhaps it shows some
advertisement
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videos
first
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. When we skip them after 1 or 2 minutes, it comes back that it is actually boring, and individuals get annoyed.
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, when we watch
a
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same video after a particular time it affects our brain to remind these videos for long hours. To conclude, though a little bit side effects advertisements have,
but
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still it is a great
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to sell
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a product
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product
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products
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or increase
the
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apply
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profit.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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