The pie charts shows the spending habits of people in the UK in 1971 and 2001. Summarize the information by slelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts
illustrates
how much members of Britain spent on different items in the United Kingdom in the year 1972 and 2001. Change the verb form
illustrate
Overall
, in 1917, British
spent much on Correct article usage
the British
food
while
in 2001, they used much on Cars.
The highest expenditure in 1971 in the United Kingdom was on food
with 44% although
in
2001, Add the comma(s)
,in
Fourty
three Correct your spelling
Forty
percent
expense was on Cars Change the spelling
per cent
hence
being the only the only
two items that Remove the redundancy
apply
was
highly used. It is Change the verb form
were
also
observed that food
expenses in 1971 was
two times higher than for Change the verb form
were
the
Cars. Correct article usage
apply
However
, in 2001 the British members spent three times more than what is utilized on food
( 43%, 14%) respectively. Petrol usage was 10% in the year 1971 which dropped by 2% in 2001 and Furniture expenditures stepped to 8% in 2001 from 9% in 1971.
The United Kingdom used to spend seven percent
on restaurants in 1971, but later in 2001 it gradually increased Change the spelling
per cent
doubled
well as the expense of books declined steadily from 6% in 1971 to only 1% in the year 2001. Correct word choice
and doubled
Finally
the expenditure on Computers rose dramatically from just 2% to 12% in 2001.Add a comma
,Finally
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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