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Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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In a number of ,companies smoking is not allowed, especially in the workplace.
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 police of some countries smoking in central areas is interdicted too and I agree with that
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 because it is one of the greatest ways to control individuals health condition and make humans healthy. Nowadays we are living in
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 world where is almost everyone
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 some problems with their health condition, especially
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 disease, which means the main reason of course smoking.
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 number of companies where
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banned, because by
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using
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 way, company managers are able to balance employers and increase the quality of work. On the other side smoking
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 buildings is not allowed, because of
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workers and company materials too. All people are different, which means not everybody is careful and responsible with themselves.
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, if somebody will smoke in hidden places
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 the buildings,
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 always throw it without putting out it and
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 little mistake can reduce a huge amount of problems. If the fire will start almost everything will burn, including essential materials and of ,course all employees will be in danger. So
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smoking is banned in business companies.
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 the policy of countries, smoking is not allowed, especially in centres. Smoking in crowded areas might be big
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damage damage
 the individuals in there.
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, in Japan especially in central parks or in
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 people do not smoke, because
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fines are too high and not everybody is not able to pay them
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people avoid
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this
 kind of bad habit there. In
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, individuals should control
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themselves
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themselves
 and give up smoking, whenever if they
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do not, even
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 or the biggest
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companies
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companies
 are not able to save their health.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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