Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?
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wellbeing
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well-being
For instance
, if a non-smoker sits next
to a tobacco
consumer's
, they will unintentionally breathe in the hazardous compounds that cigarettes release. According to recent research that former smokers who lie down across from Change noun form
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products may establish the same dangerous illnesses as smokers, such
as asthma, high blood pressure, lung
diseases.
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As a result
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