Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, a significant number of companies prevent consulting
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as it is forbidden to smoke in public places according to some
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authority
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. I vehemently agree with banning smoking at all because it causes fatal effects not only on human
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lives but
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on the surrounding.In
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essay, I describe my point of view and draw a rational conclusion at the end. On the one hand,without hesitation ,
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is a defeatist mentality that users
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give up.
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is due to the fact that drinking is injurious
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everyone's mental
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, not just smokers' bodies.
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, if a non-smoker sits
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to a
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, they will unintentionally breathe in the hazardous compounds that cigarettes release. According to recent research that former smokers who lie down across from
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products may establish the same dangerous illnesses as smokers,
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as asthma, high blood pressure,
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diseases.
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nations with strict laws on communal cigarette burning have clean air.
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, the
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is indeed very clean, which means that the living organisms produce adequate ventilation, which makes it possible for these nations to grow enough food
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highly nutritious.
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that carbon emissions
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an influence on
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health of
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animals and
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plants. And
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, how well-off the country is. In conclusion, I
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this
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already
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it for a few humanity it greatly
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everybody that every political establishment
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take steps to avoid the inhaling of harmful substances in industries and other common spaces in order to safeguard the wellbeing of its citizens and reduce the contamination of the environment.
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