Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In today's society,
people
from around the world
contact easily each other and obtain different perspectives such
as lifestyles, eating and wearing habits
etc. Being able to reach the same products
from where we prefer seems beneficial but it has some drawbacks according to differences in the future. This
essay will argue the importance of diversity and not becoming similar to other countries in terms of social life.
Firstly
, each country has their own features and traditions with its beauty and this
makes the world
more attractive. Lifestyles, food habits
or any rules regarding daily life are valuable factors to make every part of the country unique. For example
, wearing different clothes or eating some special food that can obtain certain fields show discrete meanings from people
who live in Africa and Sweden because of the tradition, weather, daily habits
etc. Therefore
, people
can prefer to eat or wear something like a country that they like but purchasing always the same items damage
cultural importance.
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damages
On the other hand
, when people
trends to buy the same products
in the world
, the reasons and importance of interacting with other people
from different cultures lose their value. In other words
, travelling for exploring new traditions and buying some special pieces from anywhere will become a normal action when we use similar goods with others. For instance
, guided tours can disappear if people
continue to get some products
anywhere. Meanwhile, this
can cause some economic, and cultural problems.
In conclusion, although
being able to get products
from wherever people
want has positive sides according to reachability, it ruins cultural, economic, and traditional diversity and values over the world
. Thereby, this
development can be seen as a threat to the next
generation's lifestyle and daily habits
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