“Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library.Which should your school choose to buy - computers or books ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.”

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To decide which items that more beneficial computers or

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for the sake of students' knowledge development, I would recommend choosing the

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option between the two.

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, with how fast the increase in phone technology is, it could be seen that now it has almost the same tier as computer utility, especially regarding the teaching material.

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, we can see now how practical phone nowadays accompanied with it is USB-based keyboard, and how they could be brought everywhere inside our bag and does not need much space.

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, rather than investing funds in a PC set, we could invest more in teaching materials like

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, especially the old ones that are difficult to search on the internet but had vast information so the student can learn how to absorb knowledge from other sources like

books

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and not only from the internet.

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, comparing the maintenance of a computer and a book is not on the same level at all. PC set had a more complex system and thorough supervision differentiated from the book's maintenance.

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, book maintenance does not require a lot of additional costs, including daily control, server care, and cable care.

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, it only needs good ventilation and the room’s lightning, additional camphor to reduce humidity, and well-organized order to keep the book’s structure in great condition. In conclusion, schools should purchase more

books

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rather than brand new PC for the library because it’s more benefitting than the others.

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, students need to understand the importance of

books

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and not rely on using the internet.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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