Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you thnk laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Despite it being thought that
recycling
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phenomena
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is
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becoming popular day by day around the world, many feel that most of the
wastages
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from houses
are
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being unrecycled.
However
, I agree with those who believe that introducing an act by the government regarding product recycling could be the best option to enhance the recycling
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activities
activites
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activities
. On the one hand, If individuals use their backyards or
frontyards
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front yards
front yard
to
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wastes in lieu
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municipality's
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dustbin, they might be suffered from many
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diseases
deseases
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diseases
severely.
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, a study has shown that in Bangladesh 78% of dengue patients are infected in their house premises because they are not used to
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bin
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, and they threw
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anywhere beside
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their homes
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.
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, mosquitoes and other insects made habitats in
this
area.
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worse, 10% of dengue patients pass away
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every year in
this
country. To resolve
this
issue, an act is
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essential which will make concern
among
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people about their health and
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.
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, Oceans are connected
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the
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rivers and canals,
therefore
, when often people are used to
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waste
to
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the canal
instead
of
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bins
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in
the
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third
-world countries, it impacts
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the ecosystem detrimentally.
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, recently a report has been published in the daily newspaper that the number of plastic
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will be outraced the number of
the
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sea species in 2050, and 80% of these used in homes.
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strict recycling legislation could be a great solution to protect the environment from the
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circumstances, and it will be secured human lives. In conclusion,
although
people should be concerned more about
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recycling
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recycling
undoubtedly to protect nature,
however
, I strongly believe that there
is
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no alternatives except the laws to address
this
problem.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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