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International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the advantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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In the
last
 two decades, there has been an increase in tourism in many
Countries
 around the world.
This
 change, though positive has a few negative impacts on the citizens and the environment of the
countries
 involved.
This
 essay will explain that the boost in the economy of
such
countries
 and increased popularity is more beneficial than the increase in crime rate and pollution associated with tourism. It is important to note that many
countries
 have become more popular because they have invested in locations that will be of interest to international
visitors
.
For instance
 , the City of Calabar is known worldwide for its famous Obudu Cattle ranch, a beautiful, serene environment in the hills of Calabar that welcomes
visitors
 from all over the world. These
visitors
also
 learn about the amazing arts and culture of the city when they
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participate
participated
particioate
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participate
 in the yearly carnival.
This
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development
developement
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development
also
come
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 with its downsides,
for example
, an increase in crime rate as local inhabitants can indulge in kidnapping tourists in exchange for large amounts of foreign currency.
Also
, areas not previously open to
visitors
 will become prone to air and land pollution caused by the large influx of people. Local police can check
crime
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 rate by increasing their workforce in these areas, pollution can
also
 be reduced to the minimum by placing signs in these locations. In conclusion, the many benefits of International tourism overshadow the negative effects, which can be eliminated by putting the right checks in place.
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