Recycling is now an essential measure : it is time for everyone in society to become more responsible towards the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Reusing non-degradable products is

crucial

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factor in saving our planet. It is argued that mankind should have a sense of responsibility in

this

issue in order to prevent ecological

disaster

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.

Although

it is vital to make an effort to reclaim our environment by recycling, I consider that there are more serious

problems

in other spheres that demand

solution

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in

short

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time. On the one hand, sorting and reusing disposable products seem to be one of the key steps that we can make as humanity had output so much litter that, eventually, it formed a huge

trash-island

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on the ocean. By

this

I mean that there is still

absence

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an absence

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of beneficial and time-saving techniques to cut down the amount of rubbish,

consequently

, the vast majority of fish and other marine animals are suffering

of

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pollution as they lose their habitat and food.

Furthermore

, landfills are the source of emission of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases, so the current accident with

greenhouse

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effect is

also

negatively impacted by these places.

Thus

, people should speculate and plan their actions as it is essential to prevent

deterioration

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of current ecological affairs.

On the other hand

, there

are

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certain

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range of other social issues that may be much more vital than environmental

problems

.

In other words

, plenty of developing countries have spread

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hazardous diseases and

no

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access to water or food supply, which happens because of poverty. These types of situations make

population

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the population

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to

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survive day by day,

subsequently

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their lives are positioned

on

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the

first

place.

For instance

, if a person lives in specific conditions beyond the poverty line, it is inappropriate for him to speculate about

rise

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the rise

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of sea

level

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and climate change.

Therefore

, responsibility towards the planet can not be fully taken because of

wide

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list of different social

problems

. To conclude, though it is time for humanity to stay focused on

environment

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and take care of it, there are worldwide

problems

which are referred to

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of thousands of people and they

also

need help and support. 338 words