Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is

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whether businesses should ban smoking only in public areas or in offices.Personally, I think the

second

point of view is quite appropriate, but according to some, we should not ignore the fact that

this

is a very difficult situation for cigarette addicts.

First

and foremost it is well-known that enacting

this

practice has many advantages in terms of human health.

First

of all, it significantly prevents passive smoking. Passive smoking

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harm

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not only a single smoker, but

also

the people around him. According to the latest statistics, 90 out of 100 people in the world It has been determined that he is exposed to cigarettes, both passively and actively.

This

is a very risky rate for the future of human genetics. Of course, the managers of large companies need to take

such

measures in order to prevent

this

situation, which is gradually moving towards a major disaster.

Otherwise

, 10 out of 100

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. It is not surprising that the

first

part will be completed very soon.

On the other hand

,it can

also

be argued that the freedom areas of

smokers

are restricted.

This

means protecting the rights of active

smokers

and creating a free space for them,

for example

, in some parts of Europe, there are cigarette tents on the road for

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,

smokers

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their needs there

instead

of smoking in public areas. In conclusion, after weighing everything mentioned, I can conclude that I agree with both paragraphs because smoking not only causes many problems but

also

the rights of

smokers

need to be protected.