Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
During
in
working experience, most Change preposition
apply
people
need to work
very hard for their future. This
crisis will affect to
the Change preposition
apply
time
that they take to do the hobbies
that they interested
in the past. There are only a few Add a missing verb
were interested
people
who give their resting time
to spend doing Add an article
the thing
a thing
thing
that they like. Fix the agreement mistake
things
This
essay will explain the reason and the effect on
why Change preposition
apply
hobby
times are not be
popular as same as in the previous.
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are not
To begin
with
the reason that can represent why there is only Add a comma
,with
few
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a few
people
devote time
to hobbies
, there are a lot
of people
believe
that they need to spend a Correct pronoun usage
who believe
lot
of money for doing a hobby
. Although
there are
Change the verb form
is
alternative
Add an article
an alternative
option
for workers' Fix the agreement mistake
options
hobby
, the cost Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
on
each Change preposition
of
hobby
becomes more and more expensive. For example
, if you interest to spend Correct your spelling
your
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free Correct your spelling
your
time
on
doing ice skating and playing some Change preposition
apply
boardgames
, you will be responsible to spend a Correct your spelling
board games
lot
of money on entrance fee
and shoe Fix the agreement mistake
fees
renting
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rental
then
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than
your
collective income that you prepare for Change the pronoun
the
using
in the emergency case is going to Change the form of the verb
use
decreasing
. Wrong verb form
decrease
Therefore
, the impact on
Change preposition
apply
people
who devote time
for
Change preposition
to
hobbies
, they need to manages
their Change the verb
manage
financial
to become Replace the word
finances
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balanced
balance
.
Correct your spelling
balanced
Furthermore
, there are
some Change the verb form
is
effect
that Fix the agreement mistake
effects
cause
Change the verb form
causes
to
individual Change preposition
apply
worker
Replace the word
working
people
which are the
stress. When Correct article usage
apply
people
grow up, they will face with
various Change preposition
apply
work
depression
that Fix the agreement mistake
depressions
accumulate
and affect Change the verb form
accumulates
to
their mental health. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, in order to work
on
the office, there Change preposition
in
are
a Change the verb form
is
lot
of risk factor
that Fix the agreement mistake
factors
introduce
increasingly their stress Change the verb form
introduces
level
Change the noun form
levels
such
as workload and toxic people
. Thus
, they are suggested to find their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
time
to remove work
problems by doing some hobbies
that they
are enjoyable on the weekend.
In conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
apply
hobby
is Correct article usage
a hobby
the
necessary thing that every Correct article usage
a
people
must have because it give
many Change the verb form
gives
advantage
to their life, while there are only Change to a plural noun
advantages
few
Change the article
a few
people
who interested
to spend their resting Add a missing verb
are interested
time
for
doing their Change preposition
apply
hobbies
. This
essay explained the
Correct your spelling
that
time
management can cause people
do
not Unnecessary verb
apply
have
Fix the infinitive
to have
hobbies
time
in their life and introduced the
mental health problem.Correct article usage
apply
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.