Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.

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Dear John I am writing

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letter to complain in the strongest terms about

noiseless

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a noiseless

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issue that disturbed me. I would like to write about

noise

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problem which

making

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by my

-door

neighbor

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. I have been living in there

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5 years with

this

problem. It has been continuing for about 2 years

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she moved here.

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, she like

listen

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to music loudly in the evening time. It is harmful

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everyone's sleeping time. As well as, sleeping is not enough

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me.

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, I worried about my health which mind affected my heart disease. I desire you suggest some solutions.

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, you can listen to music

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headphone

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. I think

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it is

perfect

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way to solve

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this

problem. I am looking forward to your helping me . Yours Faithfully. Marry.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

135 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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