In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In our modern era, the science of architecture has achieved miraculous advents of innovative ways applied to the buildings
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up.
However
, it seems that it doesn`t exist any appropriate or even tight legislation to address a controlled and well-organised
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on how and where the new set-ups should be built. I profoundly endorse that
this
situation has a lot more drawbacks than merits.
First
and foremost, all architectural offices and civil engineers as well, do not always take
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consideration the local characteristics of a region when a new building is going to be built over there.
For instance
, modern
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apartments
appartments
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apartments
are allowed to be constructed in areas with historical monuments. New offices are established over
land
where underground ancient treasures have been discovered. Notwithstanding that
such
treatment of
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archaeological
places is unethical and immoral, it
also
destroys the peaceful and
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centuries environment that surrounds them.
Secondly
, modern houses are built in
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where there has been a traditional way of construction ever since.
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anarchy in the building methods leads to a loss of
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continuity
of the tradition-made homes,
hence
the absence of the beauty and the uniqueness that they used to have.
Consequently
, these places
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their ability to attract visitors, who in other conditions would
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to go sightseeing.
For instance
, modern
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and offices are built in Plaka, a
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traditional
tradiotinal
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traditional
place
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Athens that resembles
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a small village.
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its excelling pace will soon be extinct.
Moreover
, in some countries where earthquakes frequently happen in a specific
land
, governments and engineers continue to ignore structure techniques and rules into which they ought to be harmonised.
Therefore
, when a high-strength earthquake happens, buildings or homes are damaged and sometimes people get injured or even die. It is of a serious thought all authorities and building experts not only mind about how to apply or show off the best of their work
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but
also
to respect the natural particularity of the
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land
.
Thus
to summarise, the style of homes and buildings in some cities should be decided after careful consideration of the special origins of the
land
under construction and the local characteristics of the neighbouring constructions.
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governments and civil engineers will cooperate to plan new building projects that will highlight specific areas rather than degrade them. Can you imagine a
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skyscraper
skyscryper
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next
to Acropolis?
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