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In many countries paying things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Because of the significant growth of technology
people
 can use mobile phones for a range of purposes one of the new uses for the mobile phone is online
payment
. In
this
 essay, I discuss both advantages and disadvantages of
this
 newest technology. There are several benefits to it
for instance
 after covid-19 pandemic and fear of
people
 touching anything which could spread the disease
such
 as cash, or ATM machine these
apps
 provide so useful. Many companies or banks provide online
payment
apps
,
for instance
, Amazon, Google
payment
, Paypal, etc… all of them can be used easily just by a smart mobile phone and they have some security issues
people
 should do them
such
 as using P2P factor or using a powerful firewall for preventing to hack. In recent years a new means of money and
payment
system
 was invented called Cryptocurrency, because of the decentralizing
system
 they are more secure than regular money and
payment
 systems. Anyway, most
people
 use the regular
system
 and in spite of the fact they make our life easier and safer from disease and
also
 making speed up our life, they had extremely dangerous if the government does not have serious supervising and making some powerful rules for programmers and companies on how to provide these
apps
 for protecting the user’s personal data and making extremely trusty firewall. In my opinion, online
payment
apps
 are a hatch to the new world.
However
, I do not have any trust in all of the
apps
 provided by banks or financial companies, I believe in the decentralizing
system
 of cryptocurrencies
such
 as Bitcoin, Ethereum, Dash, etc… In conclusion, the advantages of online
payment
 are more than disadvantages just doing some security
behavior
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. And in my opinion, the future is for electronic
payment
 systems specially Cryptocurrencies and I highly recommend that
people
 should read and learn about them.
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