Some people think that government should invest in wildlife projects and protect them. Other people think it is better if government invests money in other projects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Creating a better world for all inhabitants is most people's vision for the future, which is why there are many projects conducted by governments to achieve that. One of the main

focus

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is protecting all wild

population

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populations

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from extinction.

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, some people argued that assets budgeted for those

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could have been better used for other plans. Overall, all plans are made for the same purpose and no proposal is more important. Preserving the wildlife and their

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ecosystem

ecosistem

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ecosystem

might be the only way to prevent them

becoming

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extinct. A great deal of money,

further

researches, as well as

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are crucial to successfully deliver

this

program. Increasing in

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of

land

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taken for residency purposes and

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benefits requires the government to act fast before losing more

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species

spesies

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species

in the future.

For instance

, in Indonesia, especially Kalimantan, acres of forest are destroyed for the benefit of

oil

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the oil

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company

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companies

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. Many

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orangutans

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are killed or died from hunger and pollution. The resources

that

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invested by the government

for

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in

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wildlife

program

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programs

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will help to restore the

animals

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habitat.

On the other hand

, there are

another

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proposals that need the same resources,

such

as education, infrastructure, and so on. Some of the

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taxpayers

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tax payers

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thought by building a better infrastructure might help with the traffic congestion that happens in most countries.

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, investing in education could change the future of

the

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children,

like

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providing better school facilities. Better

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might change the living standard of the people. In conclusion, governments could have enough budget for all

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. Good planning and spending might be a start before choosing or focusing on which plan is more significant than others.