Some people think that government should invest in wildlife projects and protect them. Other people think it is better if government invests money in other projects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Creating a better world for all inhabitants is most people's vision for the future, which is why there are many projects conducted by governments to achieve that. One of the main
focus
is protecting all wild Fix the agreement mistake
focuses
population
from extinction. Fix the agreement mistake
populations
However
, some people argued that assets budgeted for those Linking Words
project
could have been better used for other plans. Overall, all plans are made for the same purpose and no proposal is more important.
Preserving the wildlife and their Fix the agreement mistake
projects
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ecosystem
ecosistem
might be the only way to prevent them Correct your spelling
ecosystem
becoming
extinct. A great deal of money, Change preposition
from becoming
further
researches, as well as Linking Words
time
are crucial to successfully deliver Add the comma(s)
,time
this
program. Increasing in Linking Words
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
land
taken for residency purposes and Change to a plural noun
lands
companies
benefits requires the government to act fast before losing more Change noun form
companies'
company's
Correct your spelling
species
spesies
in the future. Correct your spelling
species
For instance
, in Indonesia, especially Kalimantan, acres of forest are destroyed for the benefit of Linking Words
oil
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the oil
an oil
company
. Many Fix the agreement mistake
companies
Orangutan
are killed or died from hunger and pollution. The resources Fix the agreement mistake
orangutans
that
invested by the government Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
wildlife Change preposition
in
program
will help to restore the Fix the agreement mistake
programs
animals
habitat.
Change to a genitive case
animal's
animals'
On the other hand
, there are Linking Words
another
proposals that need the same resources, Replace the adjective
other
such
as education, infrastructure, and so on. Some of the Linking Words
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taxpayers
tax payers
thought by building a better infrastructure might help with the traffic congestion that happens in most countries. Correct your spelling
taxpayers
Also
, investing in education could change the future of Linking Words
the
children, Correct article usage
apply
like
providing better school facilities. Better Change preposition
by
fundings
might change the living standard of the people.
In conclusion, governments could have enough budget for all Fix the agreement mistake
funding
division
. Good planning and spending might be a start before choosing or focusing on which plan is more significant than others.Fix the agreement mistake
divisions
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