In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered ef ective ways of maintaining links with the past. How ef ective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?
One of the links to our cultural past is the dress and
costumes
we wear in our day-to-day life . Use synonyms
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also
reflected in the traditional Linking Words
dresses
of different places .Over the decade there has been a divided opinion on whether Use synonyms
costumes
are an effective way of maintaining links with the past. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the two viewpoints will be discussed and other ways to connect with the past will be described.
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To begin
with dress and Linking Words
costumes
we believe form a very important part of our personality and identity. Undoubtedly wearing traditional Use synonyms
costumes
helps us in connecting with our rich cultural heritage . It helps to keep our identity intact. For ,example the women of north India prefer suits over saree whereas the women of south are inclined to wear saree. ,Use synonyms
Also
the everyday clothing we wear helps the Linking Words
next
generation to be aware of our roots.
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However
it is well known that Add a comma
,However
dresses
of different regions have developed based on the weather conditions, traditional beliefs and professions that were carried out in those regions in past . But as we know today due to profession people are required to move from one place to another.,Use synonyms
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formals
are required at the office, college and schools. Owing to Fix the agreement mistake
formal
this
the traditional dress and Linking Words
costumes
don't fit in today's era and are Use synonyms
also
inconvenient .Linking Words
Secondly
, today's generation wants everything minimal and easy to wear, something Linking Words
that is
easily washable and can be maintained easily. Linking Words
Therefore
they are drifting to having easier wardrobes.A better way to maintain balance would be to allow for ethnic and traditional wear on special occasions . Linking Words
For instance
offices, schools and colleges often make it mandatory to wear ethnic wear Linking Words
on
festivals. Change preposition
at
This
ensures connection to our culture is intact .
To hammer the Linking Words
last
nail, I would like to conclude that though Linking Words
costumes
and Use synonyms
dresses
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to
help us form a connection with the past , wearing Fix the infinitive
apply
such
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dresses
in everyday life is not possible. There are other ways in which one can connect to our past Use synonyms
such
as celebrating our festivals, relishing traditional meals with family on weekends etc.Linking Words
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