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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests which require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether it is better to take
multiple choice
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 tests or the ones which require you to write an
essay
. Many assert that
one
 with a variety of answers is more valuable, whereas others may argue that
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essay
one
 is more impactful.
This
essay
 will examine both points of view.
First
 of all, the
multiple choice
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 tests are easier to
answer
 right. Due to the fact that these tasks have few answers already, an individual is able to choose the
one
 he feels is the closest to
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 correct. To be more exact, there is always an opportunity to choose the correct
one
 even when a human being is in between answers.
For example
, most of the time the tasks which require you to decide on given options are the ones that increase the score of
one
’s overall mark.
Moreover
, humans are capable of checking the
answer
 in their
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 with the provided ones. Meaning that it is simpler to correct yourself when there are options you must rely on.
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 of society might believe that writing an
essay
 could be more impactful. The
first
 reason for
that is
 the factor that it is more likely to give a thoughtful and deep
answer
 to the question through writing. When composing an
answer
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 your own words a person goes into
details
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 and explains their point more precisely.
For instance
, an examiner while checking the writing task, is able to easily detect whether an individual knows what he talks about
,
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 since the
answer
 is more advanced.
Secondly
, while composing a reply through an
essay
 a human being tends to understand a given topic more profoundly. More precisely, when a person is required to write, he is more likely to go into deeds and explore the given topic more. Considering the above discussion, there are quite a plethora of both ups and downs in each type of task.
Nevertheless
, I tend to believe that the
essay
 writing test is more valuable due to the fact that it requires more profound knowledge.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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