In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

There is no doubt that these days competitive world conquered homes and families. The question is, should both

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go out to work to be high-income earners? What to extend could harm the absence of parental

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for their

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? In

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essay, I am going to discuss the positive and negative sides of

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situation. In terms of the positive side, dual sources of income earned by both

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affected dramatically in their high standard of living.The main reason given to support

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claim is,

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are able to afford well-educated in the best learning

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for their

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. To illustrate, a high-level educational

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provides full

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for every child belonging to them and

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may give them a good impact emotionally.

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, numerous devices are available to them

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as educational trips which have many benefits for them,

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, engaging in many social activities.

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, husbands' and wives' absence for working may reach up to 10 hours daily that have adverse implications for their

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for a number of reasons,

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,

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become stressed due to the workload which makes them less energized and less cared. For

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reason, they will ignore the needs emotional that are required of their offspring. So, they will do their best to provide physical things like food, candy, and video play games to make them quite think

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all they need!

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,

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growing up in a neglectful

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could lead them to look for

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outside the family which engages them involved in trouble issues

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be with bad friends, addiction, or lack of good social behaviour. In conclusion, I believe that

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should provide a high standard of living for their

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by going out and working, but

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should be aware to control their time between work and

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of their

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to grow up in a healthy

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