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At the present time, the popualtion of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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if we compare the number of
young
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person
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 with the one of older, we see that the
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 is far superior to the other in many countries. a category sees that could present an advantage for the nations, while others agree
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 creating a lot of challenges. in
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first
 of all, due to
demographic
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explosion
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 the portion of juniors became important which is make
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society more active,
in other
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 there is less number of retirees, so the financial part for helping
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inabel, could be reduced,
as a
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 guarantee an
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 development for the country.
moreover
, statistics prove that person between twenty to forty years old
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 the most
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creative
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creative
,
also
 they are more ambitious which make
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society productive and successful on many levels.
second
 of all, thinking of the disadvantages, in the
first
 degree we found a rise in unemployment, the main reason is the incapability of the government to assure a job for all that number of youngsters who need to work. and that produces many social issues
such
 as poverty, criminality and immigration. to sum up, being
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young society means being productive,
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active
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 and creative, but ,
unfortunately
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 that comes with significant challenges
such
 as employment which is a reel nightmare for any nation's development, the ideal is finding a balance between
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two
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stage
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 of life.
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