At the present time, the popualtion of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

if we compare the number of

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person

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with the one of older, we see that the

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is far superior to the other in many countries. a category sees that could present an advantage for the nations, while others agree

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creating a lot of challenges. in

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of all, due to

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explosion

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the portion of juniors became important which is make

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society more active,

in other

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there is less number of retirees, so the financial part for helping

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category whose considered

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inabel, could be reduced,

as a

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guarantee an

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development for the country.

moreover

, statistics prove that person between twenty to forty years old

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the most

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creative

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creative

,

also

they are more ambitious which make

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society productive and successful on many levels.

second

of all, thinking of the disadvantages, in the

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degree we found a rise in unemployment, the main reason is the incapability of the government to assure a job for all that number of youngsters who need to work. and that produces many social issues

such

as poverty, criminality and immigration. to sum up, being

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young society means being productive,

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active

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active

and creative, but ,

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that comes with significant challenges

such

as employment which is a reel nightmare for any nation's development, the ideal is finding a balance between

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two

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of life.