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In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, online
communication
 is getting more popular than meeting
face to face
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face-to-face
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 in many companies. In my opinion, online conversations have more benefits compared to its drawbacks. Admittedly, there are some basic drawbacks
of
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to
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 online meetings. One of the
problems
 of online
communication
 is
time
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a time
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 difference. The difference
of
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in
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time
 between places or countries can cause some difficulties.
For example
,
people
 who
work
 for
USA
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a USA
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 company and live in Japan can face some
problems
, because there
is
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are
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 14 hours between these two countries. Another problem is
health
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a health
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issue
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issues
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. Most
of
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people
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the people
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 who
work
remote
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remotely
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 might have some medical
problems
,
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 because they do not
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do
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to
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do
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 any physical activities
in
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during
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a
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the
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 day. It can lead to fatness and other medical diseases.
Nevertheless
, despite the disadvantages of online
communication
, there are some significant profits
of
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from
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 it.
First
 of all, online
communication
 is easy and comfortable. Individuals who
work
 in remote jobs do not have to wake up early and prepare for the job. So they could save
their
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time
 and
work
 more efficiently.
In addition
, as
the
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traffic is
problem
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a problem
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 in many big cities,
online
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an online
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meeting
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meetings
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 can reduce it. With the help of
it
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,it
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people
 do not waste
time
 in traffic
,
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 and gain more
time
 for their jobs.
Secondly
, as it
known
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is known
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 that infectious diseases are the one of main
problems
 in today’s world, online
communication
 could decrease diseases which spread via air. To sum up,
although
communicate
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communicating
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people
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with people
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 online could cause some
problems
, in my opinion,
advantages
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the advantages
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 of it outweigh its drawbacks.
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