Global warming is one of the most serious issues facing the world today. What are some of the causes of global warming? How is it affecting our planet, and what can government and individuals do to solve the problem?

In the recent modern
world
,
danger
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the danger
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of global warming has been increasing and
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threatening
treating
threating
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threatening
our daily lives. There are a few critical reasons that
this
issue is escalating, namely,
an
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increasing fossil fuel usage and deforesting of green areas on the earth.
As a result
of these conducts, CO2 emissions
has
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been surged
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and that has been damaging atmosphere of the earth. I believe there is a significant role that government should do to prevent
this
issue and each one of us can
should
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also
take an important part to protect the
world
. The
first
and the most critical cause of global warming is society's
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continuous
continous
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continuous
usage of oil, gas, and coal fuels.
For example
, automobiles using oil continue to prevail
developed
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and developing countries.
In addition
, coal fuels are still important under the current volatile
world
situations.
As a result
of them, CO2 emissions have been growing, which, in term
damage
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atmosphere
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on
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the earth. The
second
biggest reason, deforesting, is
also
driving the same result; by doing so, people are destroying green areas and
damages
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on
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nature
continues
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.
Consequently
,
temperature
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the temperature
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is
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heightened
hightened
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heightened
, ice on seas melted, and eventually, changes have been causing floods, storms, and earthquakes, destroying our daily sustainable lives. To prevent the
above mentioned
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global warming's
further
escalation,
government
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the government
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should take lead to implement some bold moves,
such
as
to raise
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taxes on fossil fuels and
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financial support to those people who shift to
renewal
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energy resources
such
as solar, wind, and water powers. Each of us
also
should seriously tackle
with
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this
critical issue by changing our daily energy source to natural energies as much as possible and
stop
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using plastic bags which would pollute
seas
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the seas
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. In conclusion,
the
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global warming is becoming more and more serious and if we are to continue using
the
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traditional energy resources and keep on cutting down trees, the situation will not stop. On
this
account,
government
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the government
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need to lead
changing
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the
world
to
environmentally
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an environmentally
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friendly society,
however
,
individual
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citizen has a
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significant
siginificant
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significant
role as well, to improve the situation before it becomes too late.
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