DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? MOST EXPERIENCE IN OUR LIVES THAT SEEMED DIFFICULT AT THE TIME BECOME VALUABLE LESSSONS FOR THE FUTURE. USE REASONS AND SPECIFIC EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YUR ANSWER.
It is an undeniable fact that in our
day to day
lives, multifold people Add a hyphen
day-to-day
facing
difficulties in their every step of Wrong verb form
face
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their lives
lives
and Fix the agreement mistake
life
life
also
teach some precious experiences. I completely agree with the above statement and in this
essay, I will discuss some reasons and specific examples as well to support my opinion.
To begin
, life
is about
full of challenges and every induvial face difficult situation during their Change preposition
apply
life
span. Sometimes, we are facing some difficulties and become sad during that bad time
. For instance
, after completed
my graduation, I sent many resumes and CV as well to Wrong verb form
completing
the
different pharmaceutical companies. Unfortunately, they all Correct article usage
apply
were
rejected my application, but that rejection which I Unnecessary verb
apply
gain
from them made me strong and in my present Wrong verb form
gained
job
, I am so happy because I used the techniques and grab many offers where I work. This
is one of the reasons for success
of my today’s Add an article
the success
life
. Secondly
, there is another threatening experience of my life
is
worth mentioning. After Correct pronoun usage
that is
completed
of bachelor, every student Wrong verb form
completing
facing
some crisis related to Wrong verb form
faces
continue
the Change the verb form
continuing
masters
or doing a Change noun form
master's
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part-time
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
job
. For example
, when I completed my bachelor from the subject of
microbiology, I Change preposition
in
was
thought Unnecessary verb
apply
that
to do a Correct word choice
apply
Add a hyphen
part-time
part
Add a hyphen
part-time
time
job
in dairy
or lab, but my parents were against my opinion and they refused that. At that Correct article usage
a dairy
time
, I feel angry on
them, but Change preposition
with
then
I realize that they were right because if I am doing both job
as well as Change to a plural noun
jobs
masters
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master's
in
Change preposition
at
same
Correct article usage
the same
time
then
I did not focus on my studies. And when I got Correct pronoun usage
my master
master
degree with distinction, Change noun form
master's
then
I felt that my parents were not wrong.
Agglomerating all the above points elaborated, I would like to conclude that life
is about full of good and bad experience
and even though they seemed to be difficult sometimes, Fix the agreement mistake
experiences
but
we have to face Correct word choice
apply
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them it
it
and it Correct pronoun usage
them
is
Change to the active voice
also becomes
has also become
also
become valuable lessons in our future.Submitted by rahulgpatel19 on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion