DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THE FOLLOWING STATEMENT? MOST EXPERIENCE IN OUR LIVES THAT SEEMED DIFFICULT AT THE TIME BECOME VALUABLE LESSSONS FOR THE FUTURE. USE REASONS AND SPECIFIC EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YUR ANSWER.

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It is an undeniable fact that in our

day to day

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lives, multifold people

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difficulties in their every step of

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lives

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and

life

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teach some precious experiences. I completely agree with the above statement and in

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essay, I will discuss some reasons and specific examples as well to support my opinion.

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full of challenges and every induvial face difficult situation during their

life

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span. Sometimes, we are facing some difficulties and become sad during that bad

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my graduation, I sent many resumes and CV as well to

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different pharmaceutical companies. Unfortunately, they all

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rejected my application, but that rejection which I

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from them made me strong and in my present

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, I am so happy because I used the techniques and grab many offers where I work.

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of my today’s

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of bachelor, every student

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some crisis related to

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or lab, but my parents were against my opinion and they refused that. At that

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, I feel angry

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I realize that they were right because if I am doing both

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as well as

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same

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I did not focus on my studies. And when I got

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degree with distinction,

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I felt that my parents were not wrong. Agglomerating all the above points elaborated, I would like to conclude that

life

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is about full of good and bad

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and even though they seemed to be difficult sometimes,

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we have to face

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become valuable lessons in our future.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

325 words

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