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Some believe that modern technology has made life of workers easier while others oppose. Discuss both these opinions and give your own idea.

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Technology
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 in modern society. There is a range of opinions
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 of the impact of
technology
 in the working field, some people think that it has a good impact on the
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workplace
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work place
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, while others believe that it's not helping.
This
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 in
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 and provide evidence as to why
technology
 does in fact help
workers
 in their profession. On the one hand,
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 the aid of
technology
,
workers
 now do their job easily and at the same time in an
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efficient
efficent
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 way, the advancement of science over the years made some important inventions in the favor of the work field, it put
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their
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 a lot of modern tools that help them communicate better, exchange information and send reports rapidly
also
 achieve their tasks in a quick pace in comparison to the time before,
for example
, Laptops, a lightweight device, if you cannot complete your work at the office, you can bring it back home and complete your task without postponing it to the
next
 day.
In addition
, employees now have the access to a lot of information
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resources
ressources
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, if a worker faced a problem
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 his tasks, he can simply make a
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research
reasearch
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in
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 his phone, and in a couple of
minutes
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 he will find multiple solutions to the issue, all he has to do is to pick the one that suits him the most, website like Google or Youtube are primarily
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On the other hand
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 modern devices can be a source of distraction if not used properly, nowadays people, including employees carry with them their phones in every situation and they have the access to the internet and social media, they can be facilely distracted from doing their job, an article was published recently showed that most
workers
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spend
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 of their time at the office using their phones in non-related subjects to their job.
Moreover
, using Emails to transfer reports and to
communication
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lessen
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 the human
interractions
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interactions
 significantly, colleagues barely see and interact with each
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, and some people take the view that in the long term
this
 will have bad consequences on friendships and relationships, as individuals would prefer to stay alone and connect through the internet rather than going outdoors and meet up with others. Despite the mentioned drawbacks, I believe that modern
technology
 is helping
workers
 significantly and to limit the effects of the
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disadvantages
disadavntages
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disadvantages
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 to be made in the workplace, to minimize the damage. To conclude, as I have discussed, there are two opposing views about the impact of modern
technology
 on the working field.
However
, I take the view that it has been immensely helpful to the employees in the workplace.
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