Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think that cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
this
was a great discussion about Correct your spelling
whether
wether
some Correct your spelling
whether
people
think the
cheap Correct article usage
apply
air
flight
gives ordinary humans more freedom while,
others argue Remove the comma
apply
the
Correct your spelling
that
low
Add a hyphen
low-price
price
airplane
should be banned because Change the spelling
aeroplane
it
destroy the Correct pronoun usage
they
air
and brings many issues. Many people
believe that there is nothing wrong with this
action. In this
essay
I will discuss my opinion about Add a comma
,essay
agree
with cheap Change the verb form
agreeing
flight
provide normally Fix the agreement mistake
flights
of
freedom in the following paragraph.
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apply
Firstly
, there are many
cheap Replace the quantifier
much
air
flight
Fix the agreement mistake
flights
provide
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that provide
a
regular Correct article usage
apply
for
Change preposition
apply
independent
. Replace the word
independence
To begin
with the main of this
view, there is convenient for travel in
everywhere because some Change preposition
apply
people
prefer to travelling by airplane
. Another, the Change the spelling
aeroplane
others
reason is increased Correct pronoun usage
other
a
Correct article usage
apply
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opportunities
oppotunities
for poor Correct your spelling
opportunities
people
to obtain a new experience
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experiences
although
, some nations were not have
more money Change the verb form
did not have
likes
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like
other
but they can access Fix the agreement mistake
others
to
the plane Change preposition
apply
by
Change preposition
at
good
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a good
price
.
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prices
On the other hand
, Some people
think that low price
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priced
airplane
should Fix the agreement mistake
airplanes
be
disappear now, it Unnecessary verb
apply
was
pollutes the Unnecessary verb
apply
air
and brings many problems. The most point of this
argue
about the nations is Replace the word
argument
effect
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the effect
for
Change preposition
on
environment
because Add an article
the environment
low quality
Add a hyphen
low-quality
of
Change preposition
apply
plane
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planes
also
, possible to Correct your spelling
happen
happened
happend
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happen
likes
a release Wrong verb form
like
the
bad Correct article usage
apply
smoking
from inside the plane and Replace the word
smoke
then
climate change. However
, the further
of cheap the
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apply
air
flight
is a
dangerous for travel, because they might Change the article
apply
be not check
or consume the low quality of Change the verb form
be not checked
be not checking
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equipment
eqipments
.
In conclusion, I believe that both Correct your spelling
equipment
view
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views
is
have Unnecessary verb
apply
a
different Correct article usage
apply
thing
. Some Fix the agreement mistake
things
people
think cheap air
flight
provide a regular for Fix the agreement mistake
flights
independent
but others argue that low Replace the word
independence
price
Wrong verb form
priced
airplane
should Change the spelling
aeroplane
be disappear
now, it Change the verb form
be disappearing
was pollutes
the Change the verb form
was polluting
air
and brings many problems. I believe with low
Add a hyphen
low-price
price
air
flight
gives ordinary people
more freedom because they are have
a choice that can decide.Change the verb form
have
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