Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think that cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
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whether
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wether
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whether
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some
people
think
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cheap
air
flight
gives ordinary humans more freedom while
,
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others argue
the
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that
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low
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price
airplane
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should be banned because
it
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destroy the
air
and brings many issues. Many
people
believe that there is nothing wrong with
this
action. In
this
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I will discuss my opinion about
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with cheap
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provide normally
of
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freedom in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, there are
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cheap
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provide
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that provide
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a
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regular
for
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independent
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.
To begin
with the main of
this
view, there is convenient for travel
in
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everywhere because some
people
prefer to travelling by
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. Another, the
others
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reason is increased
a
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opportunities
oppotunities
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opportunities
for poor
people
to obtain a new
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although
, some nations
were not have
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more money
likes
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other
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but they can access
to
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the plane
by
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good
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price
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.
On the other hand
, Some
people
think that low
price
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airplane
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should
be
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disappear now, it
was
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pollutes the
air
and brings many problems. The most point of
this
argue
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about the nations is
effect
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for
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environment
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because
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of
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plane
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also
, possible to
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happen
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a release
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bad
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from inside the plane and
then
climate change.
However
, the
further
of cheap
the
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air
flight
is
a
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dangerous for travel, because they might
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or consume the low quality of
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equipment
eqipments
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equipment
. In conclusion, I believe that both
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have
a
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different
thing
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. Some
people
think cheap
air
flight
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flights
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provide a regular for
independent
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independence
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but others argue that low
price
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priced
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airplane
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should
be disappear
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now, it
was pollutes
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the
air
and brings many problems. I believe with
low
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price
air
flight
gives ordinary
people
more freedom because they
are have
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a choice that can decide.
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