With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor spaces. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Because of growing populations in cities, more and more
people
tend to live in homes without any outdoor spaces
like gardens or balconies. This
is a feature that can have a major impact in
the daily routine. Many, like me, indeed, prefer going out rather than staying at their place because they feel suffocated in their small apartments.
Living in a house with little or no outdoor Change preposition
on
spaces
may lead to negative consequences on people
’s behaviour and personality. During the COVID-19 Pandemic, for example
, many families were obliged to staying
at home because of Wrong verb form
stay
lockdown
. Correct article usage
the lockdown
As a result
, many people
, especially adolescents, began to suffer from different diseases related to the
mental health Correct article usage
apply
such
as disturb
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disturbance
of
personality, panic attacks and anxiety. Change preposition
apply
However
, it has been demonstrated that this
cases occurred much more in Correct determiner usage
these
people
who lived in tiny and narrow spaces
rather than in families who had the luck to have a garden. There, in fact, during that unprecedented time, people
could have a walk and take a breath out of their homes. Activities that have a positive influence on our body and mind.
Another downside of not having any outdoor spaces
is related to the
productivity. As a matter of fact, Correct article usage
apply
people
who live in small and suffocating spaces
tend to be less productive. Productivity, in fact, depends on different factor
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factors
such
as the environment, the people
who surround you, the
place where you live. Correct word choice
and the
Therefore
, those who stays
in Change the verb form
stay
an
uncomfortable accommodation, Correct article usage
apply
for
example
most of the students, likely get bad grades which influence and condition their mental health in a continuous cycle.
To conclude, I believe that having Add the comma(s)
,example
an
house without any garden Change the article
a
nor
balcony can have a really negative development on Correct word choice
or
people
’s mind
especially children and adolescents who are the ones that have more need than anyone of having their Fix the agreement mistake
minds
spaces
.Fix the agreement mistake
space
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