Some people argue that in the future, teachers will be displaced by the growth of computers. How far do you agree or disagree?

Throughout centuries,

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has been one of the most critical

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for all nations. It

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society with

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technological

technology

technologial

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tools that really affect our systems. Whatever the devices are effectively important for modern

life

, teaching is a complex and

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specific

spesific

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matter

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which becomes

teachers

as important as technology. I strongly support that

teachers

have to be in

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system because

of

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they can approach

to

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students

sociologically and psychologically.

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,

teachers

not only teach their

students

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issues but

also

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teach them social skills.

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, when a pupil cannot make solve their friendship

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,

teachers

may notice the

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intervene

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to make the pupil realize how she can the

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,

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kind of action is

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a benefit

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benefit

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for her.

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, a computer cannot solve

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social

problem

because

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they

have

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not any

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emotional

emotioanal

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emotional

talent.

Moreover

, all

students

improve constantly aspect of physically, psychologically and mentally ,and while they are developing they have to adapt

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the

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that they have been

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they spend their

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time ,and

students

face so many factors that affect their

life

;

besides

, they have to overcome all the adaptation matters. They can ask help from only their trainers to deal with the problems due to only they know them ,and the problems

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supposed to make some professional and personal activity that computers cannot do anything.

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, technology

also

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significant

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value for our

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it makes

life

easier. It is

also

a

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necessity

neccessity

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owing to how much tools support the

students

, they as much as learn. A point in the case, when a geography teacher

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to teach maps

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if he

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an augmented reality device the incomes that

students

learn will be more effective than a regular book.

Furthermore

, pupils reach so

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information thanks to

computer

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and the internet ,their wastage

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are decrease

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and they can spare more time to develop their other abilities. To conclude,it is undeniable fact that computers are so significant tools to contribute many eases to

education

.

However

, it is obviously seen that

teachers

are the

mainstone

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main stone

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for

education

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system in terms of

students

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social and

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psychological

psycholohical

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psychological

circumsitances

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circumstances

.