many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, myriads of brands processed their food product with an extreme level of sugar and

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lead to many

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issues among all age groups. I believe that in order to control sugar-induced

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increasing the

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and taxation of sugary

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, processed sugary

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and drinks are popular among all age groups as cheaper in

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, some countries provide a refill facility for sugary drinks

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as carbonated soda( coca cola). So many people have carbonated drinks twice or thrice a day.

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intake of sugary

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may lead to diseases

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as diabetes, kidney failure, and liver sclerosis. To control

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the officialdom has to increase the

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of manufactured sugar-added

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, the government can

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increase taxes on sugar

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method could control sugar intake in common people who have low incomes.

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, people are not following healthy life as healthy natural

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are more expensive than processed sugary

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, the US government increased the

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of processed

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and decrease the cost of fresh healthy

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in 2000,

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about 90 per cent of US citizens'

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improved within 3 months. In light of

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idea , many nations are started to implement the same to improve

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in their place. In conclusion, it is stated that the overconsumption of sugary processed

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can be reduced by increasing the cost of sugary

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and decreasing the

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of natural healthy food.