many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, myriads of brands processed their food product with an extreme level of sugar and
this
lead to many health
issues among all age groups. I believe that in order to control sugar-induced health
problems by
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price
and taxation of sugary products
and I do agree
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this
notion.
Firstly
, processed sugary foods
and drinks are popular among all age groups as cheaper in price
. For instance
, some countries provide a refill facility for sugary drinks such
as carbonated soda( coca cola). So many people have carbonated drinks twice or thrice a day. This
intake of sugary products
may lead to diseases such
as diabetes, kidney failure, and liver sclerosis. To control this
the officialdom has to increase the price
of manufactured sugar-added products
.In addition
, the government can also
increase taxes on sugar products
; this
method could control sugar intake in common people who have low incomes.
Secondly
, people are not following healthy life as healthy natural products
are more expensive than processed sugary products
. For example
, the US government increased the price
of processed foods
and decrease the cost of fresh healthy foods
in 2000, As a result
about 90 per cent of US citizens' health
improved within 3 months. In light of this
idea , many nations are started to implement the same to improve health
in their place.
In conclusion, it is stated that the overconsumption of sugary processed products
can be reduced by increasing the cost of sugary foods
and decreasing the price
of natural healthy food.Submitted by jackjohn0590 on
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