many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, myriads of brands processed their food product with an extreme level of sugar and
this
lead to many
health
issues among all age groups. I believe that in order to control sugar-induced
health
problems
by
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increasing the
price
and taxation of sugary
products
and I do
agree
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this
notion.
Firstly
, processed sugary
foods
and drinks are popular among all age groups as cheaper in
price
.
For instance
, some countries provide a refill facility for sugary drinks
such
as carbonated soda( coca cola). So many people have carbonated drinks twice or thrice a day.
This
intake of sugary
products
may lead to diseases
such
as diabetes, kidney failure, and liver sclerosis. To control
this
the officialdom has to increase the
price
of manufactured sugar-added
products
.
In addition
, the government can
also
increase taxes on sugar
products
;
this
method could control sugar intake in common people who have low incomes.
Secondly
, people are not following healthy life as healthy natural
products
are more expensive than processed sugary
products
.
For example
, the US government increased the
price
of processed
foods
and decrease the cost of fresh healthy
foods
in 2000,
As a result
about 90 per cent of US citizens'
health
improved within 3 months. In light of
this
idea , many nations are started to implement the same to improve
health
in their place. In conclusion, it is stated that the overconsumption of sugary processed
products
can be reduced by increasing the cost of sugary
foods
and decreasing the
price
of natural healthy food.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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