In the modern society a vast variety of fashionable cloths can be seen at each and every kinds of shops round the world. Some people believe that the inside of a person can judge by their choice of cloths. I am totally disagree with the argument. This essay will discuss in detail and provide relevant evidence to prove the opinion.
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In
the
modern society Correct article usage
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vast
variety of fashionable Correct article usage
a vast
cloths
can be seen in Correct your spelling
clothes
the
each and every Correct article usage
apply
kinds
of Fix the agreement mistake
kind
shops
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shop
round
the world. Some Correct your spelling
around
people
believe that behaviours
of Correct article usage
the behaviours
people
can be judged by their choice of wearings. I am totally disagree
with the argument. Change the verb form
totally disagree
This
essay will discuss in
detail and provide relevant evidence to prove the opinion.
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this in
First
and foremost, there is a famous statement says
"Don not judge the book by its cover". So I believe that Correct pronoun usage
that says
this
is often correct because there are lots of professionals who provide valuable services to the
society Correct article usage
apply
such
as volunteer employees in social activities, environmentalists, journalists, charity workers, etc, do
fashion in their personal life. Correct pronoun usage
who do
Furthermore
, some politicians in some of the developing countries wear fully white dresses to impress others that they have no dirty in their lives, but most of them are not good in theirs
characters according to my personal experience. Correct pronoun usage
their
Therefore
, it is better to evaluate a person by analyzing their qualities.
The other thing that I would like to emphasize is that the way of thinking regarding people
by their outfits has been came
from Change the verb form
coming
come
king's
age as I believed personally because there were different types of Correct article usage
the king's
dress-codes
according to their service to the king. There were Correct your spelling
dress codes
blue-color
and Change the spelling
blue-colour
white-color
jobs and they might use for Change the spelling
white-colour
the
casual events to maintain their status. Correct article usage
apply
As a result
, according to such
things people
tend to evaluate others by considering the
dress.
To conclude, the traditional thinking pattern of trying to evaluate a person on his or her outer appearance has come across from the ruling pattern in Change the word
their
the
history which is not commonly giving a correct judgment of a person. So it is better to eliminate Correct article usage
apply
such
kinds of outdated thinking patterns from the
modern society.Correct article usage
apply
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