complain to the supermarket. You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents. Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir Moradi , My name is Narges, and I write you
this
letter to inform you, I had an accident that cause a minor injury to My leg, yesterday afternoon at 5:30 o'clock when I was shopping at your Supermarket. In the following I want to describe how
this
accident happened, I Was rolling my shopping basket through Stationery ails on the south part of the shop, Suddenly I heard a loud noise and before I can do anything Lots of stuff fell on the ground, I was Shocked and slide on the floor meantime I felt pain in my Leg and see blood on my pants. That was a terrible situation
although
I did not injure badly , I felt insecurity about your shop I strongly suggest that obligates your staff
to
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double-check every ails on the matter of safety, in order to not happen
this
kind of accident
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again.
This
time I did not complain in court, but I hope nothing like that, happens again Yours sincerely, Narges
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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