Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence.

Experiments

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that the features we are born with have more influence on

person's

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a person's

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personality and growth rather than any experiences we may gain in our

life

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.I believe the

life

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episodes which we have gone through are

essential

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more essential

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on

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an individual's character development than the aspects we're born with. Nowadays,people are obsessed with the current society which

control

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is controlled

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by

the

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technology.

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,human beings are trying to develop themselves by

depend

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on their knowledge.Every individual

gain

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their knowledge through maturity.Undoubtedly,the qualities we are born with do not

effect

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affect

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on

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someone's evolution.

Human

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can be genetically similar to the previous generation's outer looks but,they do not show any similarities

of

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in

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the thoughts and activities they follow.

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,

ancient

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in ancient

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times people

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letters to communicate.In fact, minor social media platforms but,

at

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the present world most of them are using mobile phones whenever they need to express anything.

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,

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personal occurrences

are

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play

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the

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a

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supreme role

of

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everyone's progress than heredity.

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,the younger generation

try

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to become more successful by imitating others.

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as

,

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celebrities and leaders of a country.In that case, people change their lives gradually to

the

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modern social habitats.They learn and observe the struggle in the present and try to work

accordingly

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.

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,the one who

use

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uses

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an

android

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Android

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phone

is now tries

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is now trying

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to buy an iPhone.

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but not least, the

youngers

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youngsters

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do not follow the rituals which

followed

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are followed

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by their elders.They continue their own ways of doing work. In conclusion,the genes we

got

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have

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at birth and the characteristics we are born with are not important

on

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in

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one's

life

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's enlargement but, in my opinion,the experiences we may have in our

life

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be

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are

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the major influence on our personality and

it

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they

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make the path to success.