In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this siruation true in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Of course,
this
is understandable that job description
and Fix the agreement mistake
descriptions
also
favourable skills Correct your spelling
experience
experiance
huge Correct your spelling
experienced
change
in past decades. Many years ago, a man (a father) Should know how to fix the Fix the agreement mistake
changes
home
stuff, how repaired
a car if it was necessary, Change the verb form
to repair
similarly
if a girt
did not know how Correct your spelling
girl
make
Add the particle
to make
a
clothes or Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
making
bread , indeed she was unqualified for Wrong verb form
make
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marriage
mariage
.
luckily, that Correct your spelling
marriage
time
passed, and nowadays people
come to this
logie
that it is not critical that everybody know Correct your spelling
logic
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anything
anythings
about everything. In Correct your spelling
anything
reasent
days, Correct your spelling
recent
people
goes
to university or college to learn how Change the verb form
go
make
clothes, there are Add the particle
to make
lot's
of job description that they just Should Consider
the Change noun form
lots
trand
of everything in Correct your spelling
trend
land
brand
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society
socity
. If I want to buy a jacket I will go to Correct your spelling
society
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specialist
spicialist
of Correct article usage
the spicialist
this
item and buy
the best quality Correct your spelling
instead
instaed
of making Correct your spelling
instead
at
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it at
home
and wearing a jacket that it
is not as proper as the one I can buy from shops.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, I believe that Correct your spelling
today
today's
todays
Correct your spelling
today
people
are spend
more Change the verb form
are spending
time
out of home
, thay
Stick one their job most of the time
and when Correct your spelling
they
thay
come back Correct your spelling
they
home
they just rest or catching with family members and using
their leisure Wrong verb form
use
time
to refresh their mind
, so they do not want to use Fix the agreement mistake
minds
this
limited time
to fix things which some profeshenal
can do it Correct your spelling
professional
mush
better than us.
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much
However
, in my country, Iran, in small cities still you can families who manage their needs such
as Correct your spelling
old times
oldtimers
oldtimes
. Most men work outside of Correct your spelling
old times
home
and the Add an article
the home
Correct your spelling
women
women's
womens
stay at Correct your spelling
women
home
and bring the children up and also
making
clothes for them or Wrong verb form
make
also
making
Wrong verb form
make
doll's
for their girls . But in Change the noun form
dolls
doll
big
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a big
city
like the capital, Tehran, Fix the agreement mistake
cities
in contrast
of
small Change preposition
to
city
, Fix the agreement mistake
cities
people
not
even, eat at Add a missing verb
do not
home
, and they are buying food all the time
.
In sum up
, in Change preposition
apply
big
Correct article usage
a big
city
lifestyle is Correct your spelling
completely
compeletly
different Correct your spelling
completely
with
Change preposition
from
small
one. citizen hove Add an article
a small
the small
Correct your spelling
much
mush
less Correct your spelling
much
time
in big
Add an article
a big
the big
city
and they are always in hurry and do not have enough time
to work at home
in contrast
of
small Change preposition
to
city
that
each person spend less money on stuff that can Correct pronoun usage
apply
made
at Change the verb form
make
be made
home
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