Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the neighboor. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution

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Dear Ravi I regret to write

this

letter as I could not get nice sleep during night

time

due to the loud noise along with some drum sounds too and I was completely exhausted to get proper sleep and not sure how do I manage my day at the workplace which is critical and hectic schedule with back to back calls. As you know I am working for the local community hospital which requires a lot of attention during the patient visits despite having five hours at an emergency block.

However

, unfortunately, I am unable to focus on my work at the hospital as I am exhausted without rest at home since there is an enormous sound like a warship moment in my room. I know you would love to listen to music and be crazy at some albums.

Hence

, I would offer a solution to have it daily during day

time

Therefore

, I can have a nice sleep at night

time

In addition

,you go on over the weekend nights as I do not have work and if possible I

also

join you to have a musical party over the weekends. I look forward to hearing a response with the good news of no music at night

time

during weekdays and I cannot wait to join in the weekend party. cheers.!! Best regards Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Fri Dec 02 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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224 words

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