The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the
amount
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of pineapples exported by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019,
while
the pie graph displays the costs to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
Overall
, pineapple exports from country A grew the most over the years.
Besides
, distribution and retail were the most significant costs for pineapple consumers in 2019. Country A exports have risen considerably from just around 1% of sales in 2009 and reached a peak of 10% of them in 2019. In country B, exports decreased sharply from more than 4 percentage points to less than 2%,
while
sales remained relatively unchanged from less than 1%.
On the other hand
, in 2019 the highest cost to the consumer of
this
fruit was distribution and retail at 35% and the next highest was taxes at 16%.
In addition
, export costs accounted for only 4% of them, being the most expensive cost.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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