School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what is your opinion.

As the saying goes, charity begins at home,

this

simply means a child's

first

training ground should be the home. Confidence is being built and developed at home ,

however

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the school

also

helps with

this

. A child's

first

teachers are the

parents

,

cause

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children

to learn more from what they see than what they are being told or taught.  The environment provided by

parents

helps with social development. The

parents

have to provide a conducive and supportive environment which will build confidence and trust in their

children

.

This

will enable communication between the

parents

and the

children

.

Also

,

parents

should give

children

the opportunity to solve problems by themselves as

this

will increase their mental ability.

This

will allow development in their problems solving skills and develop their intellect.

Children

should be allowed to make friends and communicate with

children

of their age group as

this

will develop their social skills.

Parents

should allow

children

to make their own decisions ,

however

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parents

should provide well-detailed information about each choice.