Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The number of prison inmates has been growing steadily worldwide.

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reflects intrinsic tears in the social fabric, like low levels of

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and difficulties in reaching financial stability. It is

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argued that,

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of long

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, authorities should focus more on

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. In my opinion,

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, along with

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are the most effective measures against

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rise. On one hand, advocates of long

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claim that

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is a better solution. In fact, it is not, and it has been shown by highly developed countries like Norway, where

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rate has declined dramatically after lawmakers focused on providing better opportunities for citizens with low skills or with mental disorders.

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, it is true that some violent criminals will likely not rehabilitate, even with the best social security programs.

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, psychopaths are prone to cause

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disturbance, and

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has been proven scientifically to be related to brain alterations in many cases.

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, for

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kind of criminal, long

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should be applied, but they will

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need medical assistance. If it was possible to treat them from childhood, society would benefit a lot.

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, it is clear that

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or medical treatments are better ways to deal with criminality. Yet,

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not all, given that

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might be a factor that decreases

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the risks of young people finding life in

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. It can seal the holes that drag youngsters to an outlaw lifestyle by showing them that everything is possible and, despite any familial or local issues, a harmonious connection with society is achievable.

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, when kids are taught through humanized caring and learn job skills, they become better citizens and do not feel the need to make their income in improper ways.

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, if authorities focused on

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, a fall in

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rate would certainly happen, and

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prisons and social exclusions. In conclusion, in my opinion, long

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are not as important as

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for social stability.

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, I firmly support the idea that

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is, by all means, the most effective measure against criminality.

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, punishment and vigilance are necessary, but society would benefit more from humanized caring for those who need assistance.