TASK-2 PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGE DOES PLASTIC DO TO ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

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different incidents as well as it will improve the perspective to see the world in other ways.

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TASK-2 PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGE DOES PLASTIC DO TO ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

An increasing number of doctors and professors are leaving their poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does it cause and what are the solutions.

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars.

Many people think it is very important to protect the environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What actions should individuals take to protect the environment?

Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at least 250 words.